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out of my stomach
acidic and sung sonnet
into the nearest bucket
is a word vomit

digested, eroded
is the truth between the lines
implications unfolded
these naked thoughts are mine

bottled, restrained
you tap the tipping point
out are secrets barely contained
lies now disjoint

bad taste in my mouth
insides run out
everything's gone south
least there's nothing more to spout
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wordvomitby milkbunnies

Literature / Poetry / General Poetry / Free Verse©2014-2015 milkbunnies
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JerryLangdon Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
cool metaphoric prose
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milkbunnies Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2014
thank you! it is a poem, though. c:
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I really love your poems they're really nice :3 once again, awesome ^^!!!
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milkbunnies Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
thank you, i appreciate it :)
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Fameisdead Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
No problem :3
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Lancer037 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I've said this a lot today, but I seriously like your imagery. Keep it up!
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milkbunnies Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014
i really appreciate that!  i'll try my best!  :D
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